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M A R K
Sometimes, you hear a pitch of a concept and you go “aw, c’mon. Really?”
What almost always twists my spine is the thought “they’re making THAT crap instead of making BETTER crap.” Only so many movies can be made a year and only ONE THING motivates a studio to make a movie: PROFIT.
Everything else is secondary. EVERYTHING. And that’s just the way it is when you’re a publicly held company and your responsibility is to return a profit to your shareholders. So the people that run the studios TRY to make good movies, because, generally, good movies draw crowds and, if all goes well, the movie makes a profit.
With the rise of the internet fan-boy, though, the landscape has changed. The vocal few have literally been able to influence the landscape of movie making. Suits in Hollywood, thinking about a rabid built-in fan base (and trying desperately to not get fired) grasp at straws and then you get things like Scott Pilgrim. Like Jonah Hex. Like Daredevil. Like Elektra. Like Kick Ass. Like Kazaam. Like Spawn. Like the upcoming Green Lantern. Priest. Green Hornet. And more. Many many more.
I’ve tried to put this idea onto blog a few times, and I can never really say what I want to say. This morning, though, I found a few posts that say almost exactly what I would say, if I had the vocabulary:
How a Scott Pilgrim boondoggle happens:
There are about two thousand geek movie websites. They all go to Comic-Con. Their only friends are other geek webmasters. They all leave messages on each others’ websites, leading to hundreds of thousands of comments. They are all obsessives with no life, thus the ability to devote loads of time to running a geek movie website. They have few, to no, friends who aren’t part of this geek web circle.
Almost exactly 5 weeks after I FADED RIGHT THE F*CK IN, I, indeed, FADED RIGHT THE F*CK OUT!
Caps and all.
Version one of Untitled Space Thriller was done sometime on 8/11/10, around 7:45 my time. Not that it’s a race, but it’s also interesting to track the amount of time it takes to get something done. Just like all of the other scripts, there were times when I didn’t want to continue, and times I thought I simply couldn’t continue. But I did. And the pain was worth it.
I also completed and submitted a take on the movie version of a video game coming out this fall — starts with “Splatter” ends with “House” — and started on a pitch for another vide0-game movie to be.
Back to the Untitled Space Thriller. What an experience!. The most frustrating, yet rewarding script yet. They took the cuffs off. “Dream big,” they said.
Every script I’ve written had a budget in mind. Having just read (for better or worse) the script for ALL YOU NEED IS KILL (twice)…
… and being awed that script with that big a scope sold (for THREEEEEE MEEEEELION DOLLARS!), I thought — “hey, why not me?”
Side note: Paramount picked up the rights to LMS (Last Man Standing) at ComicCon.
(I didn’t add the yellow “GET SOME” text. Promise.)
Much like ALL YOU NEED IS KILL, LMS is a little known (outside the Comic circle) future-world with sardonic characters that 1) can not be killed; 2) have some sort of special / mystical power; 3) are ripe for video game exploitation.
Dan LuVisi, creator: “LMS, takes place 600 years in the future, in an alternate universe and is about Gabriel, this invincible soldier, who’s been created to help win a war Earth got itself too deep into with Mars. After Gabe wins the war, he comes back down to Earth and is celebrated as this incredible hero. From there, he becomes somewhat of a celebrity, a Superman of this story, but then it all takes a quick turn. Gabriel is framed for an atrocious crime, by a terrorist organization known as Pandemonium and their leader, Dante. He is then sent to Level-9 Facility, where he’ll spend the next nine years in the worst prison of all time. Once Gabriel breaks out, only then does his true story begin, and the lies and twists unravel.”
Seriously? The bad guys belong to Pandemonium? That’s not a typo? Seriously? Suggestion: re-do as P.A.N.D.E.M.O.N.I.U.M and then make all the letters stand for something really KICK ASS!
Reason I bring this up — do ALL YOU NEED IS KILL or LMS remind you of any other recent efforts?
Scott Pilgrim opened last weekend…
As I dot the i’s and cross the t’s on UNTITLED SPACE THRILLER there are several things on the checklist that stand out:
1) Write for emotional impact;
2) Make sure reader understands emotional tone;
3) Be global.
4) Let the writing be poetry, but not flowery. Rhythm. Tone. Word choice.
5) Appeal to all of the senses.
– M A R K
It’s Sunday, July 25th at about 5 in the morning. I curiously awake and eager to get to it. Something changed. Last night, around 7:00 pm.
I’m working through UNTITLED SPACE THRILLER, somewhere near page 80. At this point, you have to have a really good idea of where the ending is because, on the outside, I’ve only got 40 pages to pull it all together. So it’s crunch time.
Suddenly it occurs to me that I’ve had this feeling so many times in the past. THE DEAD ZONE.
The time when doubt creeps in. I wonder…
… Does the story have legs?
… Do I care about the characters?
… Is it cinematic? Can it be MORE cinematic?
And about a thousand other questions that go through my head and I realize that… I’m stalling out. That self-doubt is holding me back.
But what is more important THIS TIME is that I recognize I’ve entered THE DEAD ZONE and I’ve escaped it time and time again… and I’ll escape it this time, as well.
Last night as I was roughing in a scene, it suddenly occurred to me how derivative it was. Almost a beat for beat copy of a scene from EVENT HORIZON (one of my favorite flicks)…
… and I sort of disgusted myself with how… cheap it was. Like I was cheating myself and cheating whoever might read it.
The problem with the story was that it was trying to be too many things, instead of one really good thing. Sure, it worked, but just because it works doesn’t mean it’s good.
Before we started, Alex had commented that “it seems like [the 3rd act] is a different movie from the first 2 acts.” And he was right. But I thought (at the time) it would work because I had a good sense of the pace in my head. On page, though, it wasn’t working.
And so I descended into THE DEAD ZONE.
Once I saw the dreck I had written (the EVENT HORIZON-esque scene) combined with the page count, I realized that 1) I was in THE DEAD ZONE; and 2) The way out (this time) was to make the 3rd act congruous with the first two. KA-BLAM! Done. Out of THE DEAD ZONE!
Of course, out of one, into another. But still…
M A R K
Two movies came out in 2009 — both within a few months of each other. One was Transformers 2 (June), the other was District 9 (August).
Both made good money. Both had a sort of robot / alien theme. D9 was rated R, T2 was PG-13.
T2 sucked.
D9 rocked.
Why?
It’s a debate for the ages. Complex. Perhaps passionate to some.
Here’s my short take on it:
D9 succeeded because it was about PEOPLE. T2 was about “giant f*cking robots!”
Clearly, some people want to see “giant f*cking robots!” and — hey — more power to them.
Movies are about people. About how people change. About how people deal with adversity. How people overcome obstacles. If you saw T2, ask yourself THOSE questions about THOSE human characters.
Your answers, unless you’re really delusional, is “well, NONE of those questions can be answered because, well, T2 is about giant f*cking robots, that’s why!”
D9 is about humanity. Even when all of the cool stuff is going on, it’s about humanity. One quote sums up D9:
Wikus Van De Merwe “… was an honest man and he didn’t deserve any of what happened to him…”
Just. Like. That.
One more thing: the Prawns. The reason they work (and the robots of T2 DO NOT) is that, they too, have humanity. They walk on two legs. Live in slums. Have kids. Fight back against oppression. All human traits. By making the prawns relatable, they became eligible for our sympathy.
What sort of human traits did the “giant f*cking robots” have and — more importantly — did you care about them?
Watch D9 and you’ll find yourself both feeling sorry for and cheering Christoper Johnson’s and Wikus Van De Merwe’s journey. Did you do that for anything in T2, human or otherwise?
M A R K
I dilly. I dally.
Me, on Monday (4 days ago…) “Yeah, I think I’ll be done by the end of the weekend.”
Me, today, Friday, 4 days later “No. Not so much. I don’t know what I was on when I said that.”
Here are a few random things that have occurred to me lately…
1) Sci Fi scripts are generally a little bit longer. Why? It’s much more about painting pictures of the future, things people haven’t really seen before, things that haven’t been invented yet.
2) The script is 65 pages, heading for 120. Not bad for a sci-fi script. Certainly not the 130 page “epic” territory. Generally, fairly early on in the process, I’m hooked by my own story and the story pulls itself along — the things that happen have to happen as a sort of natural order of the stories’ universe. But not so much in this one — until yesterday. I wrote a scene I really connected to and I suddenly really wanted to know more. All along, I had the sneaking suspicion I was writing without heart, and I wondered if it would come through.
All this machinery making modern music
Can still be open hearted.
Not so coldly charted, it’s really just a question
of your honesty, yeah, your honesty.
Huh. Deep. And apropos. I have the most modern story telling tools around me. Literally at my fingers. Spare no expense. And even with these cold factory-like tools, my writing still needs to be open hearted — accessible. And how do you make the writing open hearted? Honesty. Good writing is many things. Telling the truth. Not cheating. Using clean, simple lines. Finding the complexity and texture within those clean, simple lines.
3) Another song…
Well those drifters days are past me now
I’ve got so much more time to think about
Deadlines and commitments
What to leave in, what to leave out.
Good lord am I getting slammed on time commitments. Like I said at the beginning, I way over-committed on saying I would be done this weekend. But, to some extent, it motivates me. I set a deadline and I’m gonna work like hell to meet it.
4) I’m frequently approached by people who want to write screenplays. Frequently. Some of them are well spoken with good ideas. Most of the time, all they have is a semi-hook and want to know how to expand on it. Most of these people, though good-intentioned, will never finish. And I think that, as you try to break in, that’s the key. CAN YOU FINISH? The first time you finish, the script will be pretty bad but you’ll have a huge sense of accomplishment. That’s OK (the script being bad) because, as much as you want to write the next MANCHURIAN CANDIDATE, you’re not going to. But IF YOU CAN FINISH the first one, you’ll suddenly realize you can do it again… and again… and that’s called “practicing your craft.” So, more than “writers write” — real writers… FINISH.
M A R K
About five hours ago, I wrote ‘FADE IN.’ First time in a long time. Probably first time since January when I started in on BREATHE.
Why so long?
A LOT has happened, both inside and out- of writing. Outside, I started up a new venture that I’ll be able to talk about soon. Very exciting. Very time consuming.
Inside, I got repped by UTA and, basically, we decided that the goal is to be a studio writer (hired by / working with studios) instead of a spec-chaser.
Chasing a spec sale is fine, and it CAN pay off. But if you’ve got a great spec (and I have a few…) then it gets you noticed. You get noticed, you can get work. You develop a track record. The deal is, if you’re a good writer, and you’re new, you’re cheaper than the other writers.
So you can bring both excellent writing and an attractive price point to a project.
What also can happen is that you quickly get pigeon-holed as “that guy that wrote that great Sci Fi horror” or whatever. Really, these are good problems to have.
A lot of the stuff that we pitched initially was stuff we had kicking around for a while. We had a virus idea. We had a blood hound idea. We had a hockey idea. We had an alien invasion idea. We had a bank robbery idea.
Miss. Miss. Miss. Miss. Miss.
So that was a little frustrating. And took a ton of time. One of the notes we kept getting was “think bigger.”
Think ALL YOU NEED IS KILL (which is gi-normous).
There was this one… other… idea… One that I had back about 5 years ago when people were sort of telling me the same thing about Osiris (fka Venture). “You’re really good at the sci-fi techy stuff. Do more of that.”
So away we go. I’ve already outlined the whole thing. Now I’ve just gotta write it. It’s big. Enormo-big. Space. Explosions. High stakes. A flawed hero. Cool tech stuff. Switcheroos. Right now, I just call it SPACE THRILLER.
I liked the outline. Let’s see where it goes.
I’ll be FADEing RIGHT THE F*CK OUT! in about 3 weeks.
M A R K
C’mon. You know you love them. I know ** I ** love them. The trumpet of the blue collar, so musical, so diverse… the Vuvuzela.
Of course, it was only a matter of time before game makers capitalized on the craze.
Bwhahahaahah!
I’m off on vacation writing the next great masterpiece.
If by “writing” you mean “thinking about writing while drinking” and if “great” you mean “passable” and if by “masterpiece” you mean “please-sweet-Jesus-don’t-shoot-this-one-down script.”
M A R K
